There are some errors and you should write longer.
If you want to write about your teachers,you should write more about them.
brandon if you asked me who is'me'? nothing came out of my mind.Mabye you can click on the hilited parted of the word'me' and then find out who is it.
Erm....... U should say 1 teacher talk about her or he then next teacher.
you should write longer
Bradon your blog need more words!
There are some mistakes.
nice
me is xinyi. and how come u so long didn't update ur blog?
There is some posts missing.Fill them in!
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There are some errors and you should write longer.
If you want to write about your teachers,you should write more about them.
brandon if you asked me who is'me'? nothing came out of my mind.Mabye you can click on the hilited parted of the word'me' and then find out who is it.
Erm....... U should say 1 teacher talk about her or he then next teacher.
you should write longer
Bradon your blog need more words!
There are some mistakes.
nice
me is xinyi. and how come u so long didn't update ur blog?
There is some posts missing.Fill them in!
Post a Comment